Tag: rewriting

• Writing a “Big, sexy hook”

  My book coach says to start each chapter of my Memoir ‘with a hook‘ so here’s my re-write for chapter 2, “Obsession“. I’d love to know what you think, guys. The Original beginning of the chapter: When I met him, I was 14 and “Will” was 16. He was broken on the inside, mouthy, sarcastic, […]

  janetdthomas77

  October 22, 2022

  Author life, books, identity, Illness, memoir, obsessed, Writer, writing

  chapterhook, editing, memoir, memoirwriting, rewriting, writerslife, writing