Bloganuary – A short story or poem about rain

Here’s my go at a poem.

Photo by Markus Spiske

Keep in mind, I have no idea about the rules of poetry, I’m taking a stab in the dark:


When I see




the ones that look substantial

and slide

down window frames

as if they’re taking

a stroll in a park

I think of Aurelie…because she likes

fat raindrops best.

The end 🙂

*bows proudly*

3 responses to “Bloganuary – A short story or poem about rain”

  1. 🙂 There are 84,000 dharma doors and even more forms of poetry. Thank you for sharing yours, Janet.


  2. water came down
    from His staid frown

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  3. I’ll have to google what a staid frown is xx


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